What it would test on a registration page
Two theories about why an interested reader does not register.
Example · a live training session
Theme 01 · Sell the hour, not the topic
Describing what somebody leaves with will do more than describing what is covered, because the cost being weighed is the hour.
- Leave with the template, filled in for your business.
- An hour now, or the same mistakes for another quarter.
Theme 02 · Remove the live problem
Answering the scheduling objection at the point of registering will lift signups more than another agenda line.
- Cannot make it live? Register anyway, the recording follows.
- Sixty minutes, and yours to rewatch.
Two arguments for the same thing, each written more than one way. What gets tested is which argument lands, not which sentence reads better.